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 | Spring  [ASR] A haiku about Spring.  |
| (5.0)| An Angel Army Review Hi SophyBells . I'm JACE , and I have the honor of reading and reviewing your offering "Spring" . I invite your attention to the comments below. Please bear in mind these notes are from one on the outside looking in; ultimately only you can decide what's right for your story.  Overall Impression. Good morning, Miss Sophy. I not only enjoy reading Haiku, but also writing it. For some reason you chose to create a Haiku without using the letter 'e'. Did you have a particular prompt requiring such an unusual case? Or was it an attempt just to avoid one of the most used letters?In any case, your efforts worked perfectly. When I read items like your offering, I'm reminded how blessed we are to have such a pool of talented writers. It staggers my imagination. Is Spring by chance part of a series of Haiku with all seasons represented? Normally I would look for an explanation of format for a Haiku. But I believe anyone interested enough to read a Haiku would know its format.  Technical and Editorial Considerations. In this section I normally list those areas that relate specifically to the mechanics of your writing--punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc. Nothing to add here. Thanks for sharing.  My Rating. 5.0.  Thank you for sharing this offering. Please accept these comments as offered in friendship and support. They are but my humble opinion.Reviewed by JACE    My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 07/10/2024 @ 12:30pm EDT