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 Rock, Leaf, Sharp Rock (Dawn Wins) Open in new Window. [18+]
A fun vore story where Eep and Dawn from the Croods.
by Orangewithlegs Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
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Nice job with this item. I like the different colors to denote the different speaking parts and thought you did a good job telling a compelling story in comparatively few words. Really nice job… keep up the good work and keep writing! Thanks for sharing your work. *Smile*

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