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 Peace Now - Purpose to Follow! Open in new Window. [E]
A vision too proper stretched way too thin - time for analysis, and maybe change - a poem
by Tim Chiu Author Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Greetings,

I found this enigmatic poem using the Random Read and Review button

I like the way you use quadruple rhymes and nonsensical imagery to bring forth a serious message about conformity and harmony. One can take it to mean we need to search our hearts and discover our true motives for behavior… are we showing off our commitment to good works to be admired in the community, or are we serving out of the goodness of our hearts?

Politically speaking, the country’s a mess from any perspective, so I don’t want to go in that direction… you’ve woven a meaning that could apply to many situations or to none at all, as the reader sees fit, but we can feel the sincerity of your words and the frustration at the status quo.

I always recommend Size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability and accessibility across devices.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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