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 Aftermath Open in new Window. [18+]
I ache to the core
by Sophurky Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

Yikes. I feel this. You’ve captured the emotional turmoil involved in so many things, from basic human relationships to big serious interactions that could change the world. It almost hurts just to read this, because I don’t know how many times I’ve felt like that myself. The lines are perfectly balanced and flow smoothly down the page, drawing us along through the narrator’s experience and tying the beginning and end together with steady repetition, adding a lyrical quality.

I would add “Drama” as a third genre, and depending on what your intentions were in writing it, a dropnote with some info about prompts or larger story arcs would be helpful. I see it’s in a folder with a name, possibly that of a character in a story project. Also, size 4 Verdana font is always recommended to ensure readability and accessibility across devices.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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