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 Road With No End  [E]
The walk is long, but I am surviving (a French Triolet)
by W.D.Wilcox
Review of Road With No End  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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First Impression

Oh, I really like this, Bill! I believe this probably hits home for many of us. Life is all about surviving day after day, and although we have loved ones who have walked with us along the way, they sometimes leave or take another path, and we only have ourselves to depend on. Those hills can be tough at times, too. But we must keep on climbing.

Thoughts/Suggestions

I have no suggestions on how to improve this. Nice work.

Favorites

I'm certain my favorite is Line 3: Road with no end, to places unknown. What a great line! That is life, so perfectly summed up.

Wonderful!

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