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| (5.0)| Dear SamiJoe  , This is some dark and very expressive words about drug abuse, well described through sensory details and depictions. The use of the thin red line was very ominous and helped me focus in on what is assumed a war of sorts, either battling with addiction or just the continual keeping it a secret. I was impressed by the tight lines and the free verse structure that was sober, direct and forward in admission, which seems to juxtapose the entire poem and the narrative secrecacy. It's sort of ironic. I just wanted to drop off those few thoughts, as I found this on the read and review page. It is a well depicted topic and without the judgment or direct messages like a call to action, but showing a particular scene through this prose of a poet. Good use of the repeating 'red line' to keep it a thread throughout, as well as the clear and distinct imagery and sensory expressions and the most ominous ending line, which added more on the 'thin' word's theme with another implied expression. Glad I was able to discover this, Sincerely, Brian WDC Angel Army Reviewer   * Sorry if there's misspells or anything left out that would cause confusion with this review, as I'm struggling with some vision issues right now.  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 06/12/2024 @ 9:50am EDT