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Given: Jun 8, 2024 at 9:20pm
Length: 699 Characters |
670 w/o WritingML
Well, I have to chuckle at this (kinda wonder which Charlie and the Chocolate Factory this woman is from).
A woman, dealing with issues that make her look like a blueberry, works at a circus. One day, she finds out that something feels more off than usual, and asks her half-sister to check things out. Looks like someone played a prank on her. Oh boy.
Characters
The characters seem interesting.
Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.
Suggestion
The Intro Rating could be "E", as the intro is safe for it.
Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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