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 JULY 4TH Open in new Window. [18+]
A small July 4TH thing involving a certain blueberry.
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Review of JULY 4TH  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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Well, I have to chuckle at this (kinda wonder which Charlie and the Chocolate Factory this woman is from).

A woman, dealing with issues that make her look like a blueberry, works at a circus. One day, she finds out that something feels more off than usual, and asks her half-sister to check things out. Looks like someone played a prank on her. Oh boy.

Characters
The characters seem interesting.

Spelling and Grammar
I don't see any issues with spelling or grammar.

Suggestion
The Intro Rating could be "E", as the intro is safe for it.

Well, this is the BIG BAD WOLF, and I howl at the moon every night.
HOWLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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