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A Cup Full of Humble Fragrance Open in new Window. [18+]
A book of short shorts
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         Review for entry/chapter: "Centipede Legs (June 18 - Legs)" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings and Happy Account Anniversary!

I just couldn’t resist another one of your offerings here… I see this is a darker and more dramatic episode. You have painted an all-too-realistic picture of something that could easily happen in real life, with Mark’s foolishness leading to a terrible disaster. I marvel at how you can take a single prompt word and create a memorable story out of it. The little details of the car trip and the characters are easily visualized without being too exaggerated or stereotypical. The tension rises right from the start as we see Mark running and slowly guess what happened as the situation unfolded. We are left at the same spot we were in the opening, wondering what will become of Mark and feeling the distress of this cautionary tale. It reminds me of things I see in the news.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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