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 The Riders - The Newhome Saga Open in new Window. [13+]
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Greetings, sir,

I do sincerely apologize for forgetting all about your review request.

This is an excellent beginning for a fantasy saga, built in a world that is solid and down to earth. The characters are well painted and distinct, with lots of potential for strengths and weaknesses to be played out in their interactions with one another. You have gathered them together and set up the “magic formula” for good storytelling: goals, stakes and obstacles, with character development arcs possible in the chances for conflict and growth. Remember to include internal conflict within the main character as part of a well-rounded saga.

I would recommend using Size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability and accessibility across devices. You should choose a third valid genre for the book to ensure people can find it when they’re browsing. It also affords more opportunities to be nominated for a Quill Award. “Drama” is a good catch-all genre. Word counts at the beginning of each entry or even included in the entry titles would be helpful for those of us who like shorter sections.

I enjoyed reading this and look forward to seeing what comes next.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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