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 Homefront Nightmare Open in new Window. [13+]
Why I Chose to Leave a Wounded Warrior
by Deborah F. Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings and Happy Account Anniversary, Deborah.

This was a raw, heartfelt and brutally honest personal narrative that struck home for me in many ways, though (and partly because) my life experience has had nothing like yours in it. I fret about these issues all the time: how will I react to someone who presents themselves as a person who might be suitable for marriage? How would I know if it was real or fake? How do you identify the “warning signs” of a dangerous person? Is it possible to understand the difference between my issues and their issues? These are part of the many reasons why I generally avoid human interactions at all costs. I think too much about getting into situations like this because I feel as though I’d be easy prey.

I always recommend using Size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability and accessibility across devices. A word count at the beginning would be helpful so we know what we’re getting into. Being a deeply personal story, I have nothing to suggest by way of correcting or modifying. It’s your story and you can tell it however you want. I admire your strength of character in sticking with the situation for so long and also for letting go when it became obvious it was no longer a safe relationship. One must always keep the children in mind in any situation, and I generally believe that one should remove themselves from a relationship as soon as there is any sign of instability or risk of violence from the other partner. You held on, believing it would be better for the children, and I respect that. I’m glad you and the kids are safe now.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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