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*Note1* My review is based on professional editing points. It is meant to be honest, encouraging, and respectful in accordance with WDC guidelines.


*Reading* THE POEM

The poem was a nice tribute to nature.

*Idea* WHAT I LIKED

The poet used a good economy of words to paint vivid pictures of nature's wonders.

*Star* STRUCTURE

This is a poem with 5 quatrains and an AABB rythme scheme.

*Star* MECHANICS

I did not spot any spelling/punctuation mistakes.

*Star* DESCRIPTIONS

I liked: From oceans vast to skies so divine. In flowers blooming, mountains tall," I could easily picture this as I read. It put me in the moment as a reader and evoked subtle emotion - pride in the beauty of nature.


*Star* PARTING THOUGHTS/SUGGESTIONS

The opening invites the reader in and keeps them reading. The title is a nice fit for the poem. I enjoyed the reverence for nature in the poem.

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