Hi Tucker,

This is a fantastic story. The tone is filled with confusion and unease. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering what, exactly, is attacking the U-boat. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about a German U-boat which gets attacked by a mysterious sea creature while on a mission. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going oh here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. There is no dialogue but it is not needed here. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. The story is well structured and consistent in terms of point of view and tense. You have accomplished a great deal in just a few words. Great job.