Hi Tamo,

This is a wonderful story. The tone is full of anxiety. It grabs all the reader's attention and makes them want to read on. The reader is wondering if Possum will be able to exist and survive in its environment near humans. They will read to the last word to find out. The story is about three animals who live out their existence near the restaurants and businesses that are run my humans and try to survive on what they find there. The conflict is well defined. There is no doubt about what is going on here. The characters are well developed and believable. They come across as real people. The dialogue is well done and realistic. The characters speak like real people. The description is detailed and vivid. It puts the reader all the way into the story. I did come across one structural issue that needs your attention:


1)Stay back here I'll signal you when it's ready pssom-Should read "Stay back here, I'll signal you when it's ready. Possum"

The story is consistent in terms of point of view and tense. Great job.