Introducing Myself [E] I'm a freelance writer, I create websites, and have knowledge doing SEO work. |
Greetings, Timothy Money! I am reviewing this because I discovered it on Read & Review. I noticed you are a brand-new member here on Writing.com and I welcome you to this wonderful community of writers! First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked This is a great first introduction on who you are and what you do. You also offer your services and include a website, in case anyone is interested. Suggestions/Comments to Consider I really don't have any suggestions. Everything looked great--you've included lines between paragraphs, and there were no grammatical or spelling errors that I noticed. Even though it's an introduction vs a story or poem, you've still taken great care to proofread it. You've left the reader with a good first impression! Final Thoughts I look forward to seeing you around the community. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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