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Question: Guns or Mental Illness  [ASR]
Is violence in America due to guns or mental illness?
by Kathleen Cochran
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Greetings and welcome to writing.com!

I found this using the Random Read and Review button.

First off, your presentation on the screen is excellent. I usually have a laundry list of recommendations there, especially for newbies, but you’ve done everything correctly in that respect.

Then, you have taken facts and arranged them in a tidy manner to present a balanced perspective. I was reading with the expectation of finding some agenda or other and wondering “whose side” the author is on, but the conclusion you’ve reached is simple and inarguable, with plenty of carefully formatted citations to back everything up.

This was an easy read on a serious issue, and I liked it, as much as one can “like” a nonfiction item.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*



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