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 Introducing Myself  [E]
I'm a freelance writer, I create websites, and have knowledge doing SEO work.
by Timothy Money
In affiliation with SIMPLY POSITIVE GROUP  
Rated: E | (4.0)
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Hi Timothy,

This is a wonderful article. The title is direct and to the point. The reader knows exactly what they will be getting out of article. I love pieces which tell me something personal about the authors around here. I began to read right away to find out more. You launch into the article without introduction or preamble. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. They will read to the last word. You have written introducing yourself and your business to the people here on the site. The reader is delighted with the look they get at you as a person as well as a writer. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. I did come across a few structural issues that need your attention:

1)Im just-Should read "I'm just"

2) I also do work for people. Mainly proof reading and retyping books. Should read "I also work for people, mainly proof reading and retyping books.

3)well-Should read-"we'll".

You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.

A Simply Positive multi-signature.
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