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Review #4753856
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Teensy Tiny Tales  [13+]
A book of quick reads.
by Ned
         Review for entry/chapter: "A Bird in the Hand is Not a Cat " 
Review of Teensy Tiny Tales  
Review by Cubby
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, Ned! I am reviewing this because I noticed it on the Newsfeed this morning, and to top it off, it's your anniversary month! Five years here at Writing.com on the 29th! *Smile*

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* It didn't take me long to figure out what might be happening to poor Tweety bird! *Laugh* Of course, it's really not funny, and yet...*Bigsmile*...it is!

         *Bulletg* Great job with writing this little piece in only 100 words. And it's all done in dialogue. Very impressive. You make it look very easy, but I know better. *Wink* And great flowing dialogue, by the way.

         *Bulletp* Your font size and linespacing are very much appreciated. *Smile* Thank you for that!


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         No suggestions. Everything looked and read great.


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         I noticed another member writing 100-word Micro-fiction, too. Is there an activity/challenge for this, or is it just something you've decided to challenge yourself with? Either way, great job!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
  K e e p on W r i t i n g !
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