Hi shijogeorge,

This is a fantastic article. The title is enigmatic and attention grabbing. It tells the reader very little about what the article is actually about. They are intrigued and will begin to read to find out more. You introduce the topic by telling the reader exactly what they will be getting out of the article. This takes all the reader's attention and focuses it completely on the topic and the article. Anyone interested in genetic engineering of any sort will anxiously read to the last word. You have written about influencing organisms at the molecular level to promote more desirable traits within these organisms. You have done your research here. You are conversant with your topic and easily make it comprehensible for your reader. The length is perfect. You completely develop your topic without belaboring the issue and making the article tedious. You use a formal, organized style that is very appealing to the reader. Great job.