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Microscopic Stories Open in new Window. [18+]
Entries for the Micro Fiction Challenge 2022 and Drabble Activity 2024.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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I love what you did with the prompt!

I could picture the scene as you described it. It was great to imagine the 'gardens and courtyards of WDC'! I'm wondering WHY she needed that leaf so badly, but 'leaving' that unsaid is part of the mystique of the story.

The last line made me smile!

A special shout out for the easy to ready layout!

Write On,
Sonali

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