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 The allure of lies and insecurities. Open in new Window. [E]
Emotional journey through love's maze: Lyrics about love, belonging, and identity.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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A good song, with a flow that feels rather like a rap or a free verse poem which reads quite well either way. I can appreciate the depth of the narrator’s conflicted feelings, and such emotions have been covered many times before in the songwriting world, but of course each iteration is in some ways unique.

The font you’ve used seems much too small here: I always recommend size 4 Verdana for items. You can correct font size using the line of editing boxes above the text entry section. Perhaps a line count would be useful.

Take care, thanks for sharing and keep writing *Smile* *HeartT*


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