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 nine seconds of your life Open in new Window. [13+]
An entire life remembered in nine moments of nine seconds each. Is life sad or beautiful?
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

What a poignant and touching picture you’ve painted of a life that was not quite enough. We see the brink of tragedy hinted at many times, and the slippery slope of old age and feebleness comes all too soon. I don’t think this life was a happy one; we see the person dying basically alone, with no loved one by their side, no children, no one to help them when they fell. It’s heartbreaking to think the person couldn’t find another love after the first one left, or that they couldn’t at least have a child. One wonders what the underlying worldview was behind their life, and whether there was some way they could have had a more fulfilling experience, or if we’re all simply pushed along by fate to some end we didn’t necessarily choose.

I would recommend using Size 4 Verdana font to ensure readability and compatibility across devices.

This was powerful and haunting. We all face these “cliffs” in our lives, and we have to face them with some sort of optimism or else all is lost. Or is there any way to handle these fateful events to steer them to a happier conclusion? Such questions linger long after the story is read and moved aside.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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