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 Review #4752807 |
| (4.5)  Welcome to WdC from the "Newbie Welcome Wagon" Hello Anya, Welcome to WDC, our abbreviation for our site. Your description of why you are here is similar to many of us. What you write is as important to us as it is to you. One of the main focuses here is to read and review each other's work. Your personal, emotional letter came up for review on the Read A Newbie page. You are referred to as a Newbie, or new member for the first year you are here. Overall impression: Your piece is a personal and emotional memo to yourself to remind you about why you are with this person. The things the person has done to earn your respect are apparent. In a few words you have conveyed deep feelings which appear evident to the reader as well. I think your writing is well-organized and expressive. Each thing, no matter how small, is detailed here. I felt the depth of your emotions and moving a reader to feel like that is a gift of good writing. A word about a couple of things. Your first word "Its" should be It's. The way you "begun to recognize" should be began. "For example moving a centerpiece" should have a comma after example. All in all, a second edit never hurts to catch things. I appreciate you writing about something deeply personal in "Easy." I felt privileged to be one of the first to read your work. Looking forward to more. Write on! tracker  
  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 05/19/2024 @ 11:25pm EDT