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Review by Choconut Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What I liked


*StarV* It was your title which drew me to this item. I love it. Once I started to read your synopsis, I found myself wondering what would happen in the novel. The fact that brother had to fight against brother at the end — a battle between good and evil — is brilliant.

*StarV* The Faerie Realm sounds as though it can be both beautiful and frightening. I never realised there is good and evil in that world. But, actually, it makes sense that there is. I wanted to know what the prophecy is that Tyler and Dylan must fulfil in order to save the good part of the Faerie Realm. I think it will be interesting to see them both progress in their quest. I wonder what obstacles, what evil entities, Tyler will face in his part of the quest. I know that blood will need to be spilled at the end, when Tyler and Dylan fight, and I'm sure it will be Dylan's, in the end.

*StarV* To fulfil his part of the prophecy, Tyler must travel to Mississippi, and that intrigues me. I haven't read any of this genre before, so I am interested how you blend the world as we know it with the Faerie world. I also wonder what, or who, Tyler will find in Deacon, Mississippi.


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Suggestions


I did wonder why Tyler and Dylan were sent through a portal to the Faerie Realm. I guess that would be answered if I read the book, so you don't really need to put it in the synopsis. However, for people like me, who are newbies to this genre, it would be nice to understand where, and why, this story began.


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Parting Comments


As this is a synopsis of the whole book, you do a great job with packing in lots of information. You have piqued my interest and left me wanting to know more about this story. And that is exactly what a synopsis should do. So, thank you. Great work.

Happy WDC anniversary!


Choconut

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