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This is a thought provoking poem giving various instances where the Lord manifests and isn't recognised. A true believer would be able to relate.

Suggestions:
1. You switch from past tense to present tense and back again. Maybe you could standardise this.
2. You might like to use some WritingML like font, line-space, center and maybe even colour to enhance your words.

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On!
- Sonali

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