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 | Broadway's Bloopers  [13+] The failure of many can be the lifeline for the few. Survival daunts an unhoused man.  |
| (5.0)   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"   Greetings, Bog! I am reviewing this because today is your One-year Anniversary at Writing.com.  First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest. The Positives/What I Liked My assumption would be that this contest entry must include the words popcorn, fork, and slippers, since these words were bolded. Great job! I actually never thought about a homeless person being offered the leftover popcorn from the theater every night. He was pretty fortunate to be living behind the nearby dumpster, I suppose.  I've got to tell you, I never expected the ending to turn out as it did!  However, it worked! It's too bad for Ella that all those weeks of quality entertainment at the theater led to less popcorn for Johnson.  Hunger definitely affects people in different ways! Favorite phrases...morbid genius feral mind  I loved the title, by the way! Broadway's Bloopers is very clever, indeed!  Suggestions/Comments to ConsiderI have nothing to suggest to improve this piece. Very well written! Final ThoughtsI especially liked the first part of your story summary... The failure of many can be the lifeline for the few. You've done a great job with the prompted words, too. I wouldn't be surprised if you won! Once again, Happy One-year WDC Anniversary. I noticed you haven't been here for a few month. I hope you return! Have a great day and... K e e p on W r i t i n g ! Cubby ")
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