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 Desert Gold  [E]
colors of the sun in the desert
by LeJenD'
Review of Desert Gold  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hallo!
This one showed up on 'Read and Review'.
It's a lovely poem about a topic that one doesn't quite expect - 'colour' combined with 'desert'. The reader can feel how delighted you were when you experienced this moment.

A special shout-out for the layout and the (sort of) alliteration with the 'b' sound!

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
Write On,

Duck sig - thanks Falguni!
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