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 The story goes on Open in new Window. [18+]
We keep making songs, we keep writing our status. Dialogue only CRAMP entry.
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Review of The story goes on  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

Hey, this was amusing. I found it with the Random Read and Review button. I was able to quickly pick up on what was going on, partly because I love music and one of my favorite bands started by playing small local gigs like that.

The characterizations came through quite well, and I could see the friendship between the two people, as well as getting background on how they met and all that, even with being a dialogue only. It’s a well constructed story, with an ending that leaves us hanging in a funny way.

I don’t have anything to suggest except for using Size 4 Verdana font. Looks great otherwise.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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