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May Angels Watch  [E]
Let the serenity of angels calm you in this forthcoming year.
by VictoriaMcCullough
Review of May Angels Watch  
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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This is a lovely poem, gently wishing good things for others. The title and brief description work. A special mention of the easy to read layout and verse structure.

Comments:
1. In the line about 'spouses' - would you like to say 'you and your spouses' ... ? I thought the reader him/her self was being left out! *Smile*
2. Throughout the poem is a wish for 'you' except one line which is for 'me'. Is this deliberate?

Thanks for sharing this lovely poem!
- Sonali


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