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 Flamingo Bat Open in new Window. [13+]
Life passes an angry man by.
by Joto-Kai Author Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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Hello Joto-Kai

Congratulations on your Writing.com account anniversary this month! I'm sending this review in honor of the occasion, courtesy of the "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window. activity.


*Penw* Positives

I enjoyed reading this item. It was short, to the point, and you did a good job capturing the character's emotional state.


*Penw* Suggestions

No specific suggestions for improvement.


*Penw* Overall

Overall, this was an engaging read that included just enough detail to create vivid emotions and imagery while keeping things moving along at a brisk pace. Nice work!


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