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 A fish story  [ASR]
A little girl wants to go fishing with her brothers
by Arakun the twisted raccoon
Review of A fish story  
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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What a charming response to the prompt! Though it's flash fiction, all the characters and their points of view come across.

I knew there'd be a twist, that she'd wind up winning, and I was kept reading to find out how. You wove the tale well and the climax sure brought a big smile.

My only suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size and line space.

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On!
- Sonali

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