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Given: May 9, 2024 at 1:49pm
Length: 1,111 Characters |
1,086 w/o WritingML
Hello fellow writer. Happy Account Anniversary. I must admit your introduction to this piece intrigued me. A vampire working retail? I was not disappointed to read this. You create a novel spin here. This vampire is a victim in dire financial straits. She has resigned herself to working a menial job and dreams of finding her lost fortune, so she can return to the lifestyle she misses. She struggles with the mundane, everyday tasks like wearing a company uniform and co-existing with others in a closed environment. She is a slave to an alarm clock and toils a set amount of time. And surprise, this creature of the night is able to function during daylight hours. I suppose I could accept the whole goth vibe. It sounds reasonable. Who would suspect their co-worker is a vampire? Oh, and this floundering character has morals. Good to know. She draws the line at hunting co-workers and does not wish to know her victims. Yes, this is an atypical vampire. I would like to see more of her in other escapades. Thanks for sharing your writing. It has been my pleasure to read this.
You responded to this review 05/17/2024 @ 11:18am EDT
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