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 The Ocean  [E]
The Ocean sings to a troubled Sailor.
by Graham B.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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What a lovely, lovely poem!

In a few short, simple lines you've covered a gamut of emotions and related them brilliantly with nature. This poem can be read just simply as is, or as a metaphor for the situations we go through in our life.

My only suggestion would be for WritingML - font, size, line-space and center.

Thanks for sharing this one!
Write On,
Sonali

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