I thought you did a great job outlining the qualities that you'd want to see in an ideal boss. You addressed the elephant in the room in the first paragraph (that for some people an 'ideal boss' is one that leaves them alone and gives them overly generous praise and rewards), and did a great job of diving deeper later in the piece.

Toward the end, some of the points stated to feel a bit repetitive. If you ever revisit this piece with an eye toward updating it, it might be worth considering whether some of the examples can be consolidated, or if you can streamline it a bit.

Overall, I really enjoyed the read and thought this was a well-reasoned, well-presented essay. Nice job!