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Oct 10th asst. High above the river Open in new Window. [18+]
A culture of suspicion and secrets. How will João deal with this and they with him.
by Kåre เลียม Enga Author Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Greetings,

We meet again thanks to the Random Read and Review button. I hope I’m not being silly or annoying here.

This was a fun read, as we see the mysterious old lady telling the children about herself from a long time ago. I didn’t figure out why she was hundreds of years old until you revealed the “vampire” concept at the end. I’m not into vampire lore, but I like the historical aspect of this. As a quick vignette it’s pretty cool and stands on its own.

It’s nice to see your scribbling process and the thoughts gathered at the bottom. Mine are similar when I write.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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