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More Earlier Poems  [ASR]
Rediscovered some of my old stuff, needs refinement or trashing
by Waiting in the Pumpkin Patch
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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Hallo!
This item currently contains three poems.
All three speak directly to the reader, bringing out the essential element of something that seems everyday. Descriptions are effective and evocative.

Poem #1: Lady
I love it. It shows how someone whom the world considers 'ordinary' - not worth a second glance or thought - can actually be dignified, even heroic.

Poem #2: Smells
I was expecting something about smells in general, but you got to the point at once. I can relate to this poem personally, having been dumped myself. I appreciate the wistfulness for the one aspect you miss, that you bring out so well.

Poem #3: If I Had My Druthers. . .
I like John Denver's music but have heard only a few songs. I'll have to look up this one and hear it, now! The scene is cozy and the last line made me smile!

Thanks for sharing these gems!
- Sonali

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