Hello, Zeke!

Happy Writing.Com Anniversary day!


INITIAL IMPRESSION / OVERVIEW:

You wrote a comforting, religious, praise and worship poem.

You kept me riveted and I read straight through to the end. Great way to catch my attention and keep it.



MORE DETAILED FEEDBACK:


I went to your portfolio to find something to review and this praise poem of yours caught my eye. Perhaps the awardicon or the placement near the top of your portfolio helped with that. Thank you for your reviews all year long. You are always so kind, I'm glad God blessed me with time today to celebrate you!

This poem reminds me of the familiar old refrain recited in church. Actually, the first stanza is it, so I'm sure that was intentional. The whole poem is a beautiful praise and any could be a refrain said in church.

My favorite line was: "He’s our Savior." Because that's the most important thing of all. Thank You, Lord Jesus Christ! God is good and great!

I didn't notice any spelling or grammatical mistakes (or mistakes of any kind) in your group's page. Well done!



IDEAS TO MAKE YOUR PIECE STRONGER:
In the spirit of helpfulness, I have a couple little suggestions to make your piece stronger. They're not about the poem itself, that's fantastic. It's more about getting more readers, if that's something you desire. If you're interested in some constructive criticism, read on. But if you aren't no worries. Just know that I enjoyed your piece and move on to the next section.

I'd recommend adding two additional genres. Perhaps inspirational and spiritual? It might help you get more readers from those who search by genre.

Also, if your membership level allows for you to add a thumbnail picture, that can also generate more interest.

That's all. Two little things. And really, they're totally optional.


CONCLUSION:
You have a great writing style and heart for the Lord and I love being your friend here and hope you have a fantastic Writing.Com anniversary!

Thank you for sharing your time, creativity, heart, love God, and writing with the Writing.Com community!

May love, joy and peace be yours in abundance!
PWheeler













Positive Hearts
A Review from: "Positive Hearts Reviews Group" 



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