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Review #4749851
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 The Change Begun: A Forecast  [ASR]
A poem about change - a rhyming poem.
by Tim Chiu
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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Hallo!

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Your warning is correct - don't chase the riches. The parameters by which 'success' is measured may not be (are not) environmentally friendly and this is leading to climate change and other adverse effects.

Were you trying to pinpoint something specific, like the stock exchange? I don't know if I'm being obtuse but I couldn't understand the exact meaning!

A little type, perhaps:
First line: Isn't is 'Lo' and behold?

Thanks for sharing this vital message!
Write On
- Sonali

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