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Once a Soldier ... Open in new Window. [E]
His shoulders stoop a little now, he doesn't stand as straight. (Form: End Rhyme)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Greetings,

A perfectly written reflection on the aging soldier who carries himself with pride and dignity through the years. It shows him to us with his medals and memories, saluting those who have gone before and pressing forward to honor them.

I enjoyed the tight meter and rhyme scheme; it felt like an old-fashioned type of poem. I spotted the image that’s being used as the line divider; very clever.

Take care, thanks for sharing, and keep writing *HeartT*


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