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 A real nightmare  [E]
In our days we experience stress daily and it is the enemy of our health
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Review of A real nightmare  
Review by Cubby
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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*Tulipp* Greetings, writer! I am reviewing this because I am discovered it on Read & Review. *Smile* I also noticed that you are new here at WDC! Welcome! If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask. I did notice, too, that you've filled out your BIO already. Good for you! It is, however, written in another language (French?) so I couldn't read it, since I only know English.

*Quill* First of all, my reviews are intended to be helpful and encouraging, not hurtful in any way. Use what you feel works for you, and leave the rest.

*Tulipo* The Positives/What I Liked

         *Bulletv* Aw...the dreaded panic attack! I had never known of such a thing until I experienced it for the first time in my late twenties. Like you wrote: The family, the job and all I had to do i no longer had any time for leisure. That will do it! It's so important to take a little time for ourselves IF that is possible.

         *Bulletg* Your title fits perfectly, as panic attacks are A real nightmare.

         *Bulletp* I noticed that you've filled out the genre option as Health. Good choice!


*Tulipo* Suggestions/Comments to Consider

         *Right* You also have two other genre options. You might consider Experience, too. And Personal. Or maybe some other genre. It's up to you, of course. *Wink*

         *Right* There are only a few little typos, which could be because English is your second language, for example: than disappear = then disappear


*Tulipo* Final Thoughts

         This is a great topic and one that many readers can relate to. I noticed that you have this listed as a short story, but I got the impression that you were sharing an experience you were having. If the latter is the case, you might want to change it to Non-fiction. If I'm incorrect, please disregard! *Smile*

Again, Welcome to Writing.com!


Have a great day and...*Quill*
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