It's truly a fantastic rhyme that draws the image of a warm summer's image nicely. But is it a proper Haiku? It's a big question.
The primary condition of a Haiku is it should be unrhymed in nature. So, how can rhyming poetry be a traditional Japanese Haiku? So, it can't be a traditional Japanese Haiku.
The next important thing is the purpose. The main purpose of a traditional Japanese Haiku is to draw the beauty of the image of mother nature which is brilliantly performed.
A Haiku contains a single u rhymed sentence whereas that rhyme contains three rhymed sentences. It's a big mistake.
Other characteristics of the Haiku have been followed exactly.
The performance is truly notable. Except for the two important rules. I hope those mistakes will not be repeated in future.


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