I like the sentiment of this poem. It does a great job of separating out the things that can be mercurial in our lives from the things that can be permanent and meaningful. I particularly like the "death where is your sting" line, which is a familiar callback to both scripture and many popular Christian worship songs.

The only part I was a little unsure about is the "family, friend last forever" by "lovers may fade" sentiment, as I'm not sure that friends have the same sense of permanence as family. Even family can be something that people "opt out" of in certain circumstances, but the separation between "friends" (being something that last forever) and "lovers" (being something that might fade) needs a bit more context to make the distinction, I think.

Overall, this was a great read and had a great message. Nice work!