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Colors of Fall Open in new Window. [E]
The colors of fall inspire a sense of belonging. (Form: Free Verse)
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Found this using the Random Read and Review button. I love a good nature poem, and this has all the essentials of one that is both charming and memorable.

You provide us with lots of beautiful imagery, using metaphors like “shred the sunlight” and “a vagrant
touch of red” to paint the scenes of a quiet autumn moment. I love the observation of the hole where a little critter must be hibernating. And the final lines about feeling at home in nature open up the poem to a new layer of meanings.

I don’t see anything to recommend here; your free verse flows smoothly along the page, and the formatting is good. I rarely have anything significant to suggest about poetry, being hardly an expert on such things as meter and structure. I prefer to view poetry as a highly subjective art form, where we can paint images of what we have in our minds or what we experience in life without worrying about counting syllables or measuring iambic feet. I know a good poem instinctively, and this is one of them.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

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