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Review #4748677
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 Benefits of Multiple Analysis Open in new Window. [E]
Analysis of 3 short stories using different forms of analysis
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Phew, that brought back memories of plowing through college level literature textbooks at an early age and wondering why anyone bothers *Laugh* No offense to you or your hard work in writing this - I am after all hanging out on a literature website - but I’ve always had a distaste for stories with dull, heavy themes that have to be pondered deeply upon to try and decipher when the story itself isn’t even very “good,” by which I mean enjoyable, enlightening or overall “positive.” I guess my own fictional writing leans towards childish and saccharine, especially lately. Funny because I was just considering that earlier today.

You’ve done excellent work here, but the way it moves through three different stories and a myriad of different analysis styles makes it feel too brief and “sample-ish” in how it deals with each story and style in just a few simplistic sentences. Perhaps it would have been made stronger by focusing on just one or two stories, or taking more time to dive into each form of analysis. But you probably had a word count to keep in mind, which reminds me it’s always nice to see one at the top of the page so we know what we’re getting into. Also, Size 4 Verdana font is definitely recommended here so it doesn’t feel like we’re reading an interminably boring essay which feels like a used car contract.

Also, one last genre would be a good idea to make it easier to find when browsing - not that anyone would be particularly interested, most likely. Perhaps “Drama” or “Reference” would be suitable.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

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