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Hi T.

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Mary, Mary

First Impression: Wow, nicely woven story of a mother and daughter's relationship. I've never asked a mirror a question in all these years, it never crossed my mind to do so. These days when I do actually look in the mirror I seen an old lady, and wonder where did I go?

What needs your attention: Nadda, Joey would tell you that you have the spag under control. (spelling, grammar and punctuation thing) He would be right, you do.

What part I liked best: The Monkees song made me chuckle. I used to sing quite a few of their songs. Last Train to Clarksville and Daydream Believer and A Little Bit of Me , A Little Bit of You. I hadn't thought about the Monkees until I read your story.
The girl waking up to realize she's an adult now and the tune is playing in her head. Wishing she could have more time with her Mom. For me it would be with my Grandma.

Overall impression: A stroll down memory lane with Mary as she recalls annoying song lyrics her mom would sing while fixing her hair in front of the mirror was beautifully crafted.

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What does the Fox say?????


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