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Hi Sandra

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Battle of the Bulge

First Impression: Oh can I ever relate to this story. I decided after my daughter was born to take aerobics class with a friend of mine. She should have been called e-friend after signing us up for an aerobics marathon fundraiser for the high school. I didn't know what was involved but figured okay I can handle this, I'm not in that bad shape. I made it through 6 hours of aerobics with a ten minute break between each time-frame. I couldn't walk or sit or even lie down on my bed without muscles screaming at me. My friend calls and wants to know if I'm ready for class in the morning. GRRRR

What needs your attention: Nothing, I didn't see any punctuation, grammar or spelling errors.

What part I liked best: Millicent collapsing on the floor as her reflection jiggled. I can relate. I jiggle in more places than I want any dang mirror to expose.

Overall impression: It's a fun story to read with good pacing as we see exercise in front of a large mirror. I loved the self analysis as Millicent worked out.

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