"Game of Thrones"  "The Iron Bank of Braavos" 



Hi Sandra

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: Lyn's Other Battle

First Impression: Ahh, I'm a star of my own story. My hubby would definitely stand there and chuckle first before rescuing me. He does have a warped sense of humor. I called my husband over to listen to your story. He was laughing his ass off as I read it out loud to him. Thank you for bringing some humor into today, we both needed that today.

What needs your attention: The first hyperlink didn't in the second line. I didn't notice any punctuation or grammar issues. I was reading and laughing.

What part I liked best: Vic and I both loved the analysis along the way in the story, He said, it would be just like me to forget to put the water in the teapot when I'm trying to meet a deadline. I definitely gave him the wife glare with that snarky comment. Of the two of us, I'm not the absent-minded one, he is. I should write a book on all of his antics.

Overall impression: It was a fun story to read with good pacing and lots of punch lines throughout. I love how you tied it into two prompts.. Go Team Florent Fox.

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What does the Fox say?????


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