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Hi Pappu Kumar

My name is Lyn, I am one of the sly foxes.

Title: The Weaver's Tale

First Impression: In your introduction to make it work with the 90 character constraint.. The Weaver's Tale set in a small Indian village and a talented artist.

I've seen some beautiful tapestries in my life but unfortunately, it's an art that has been corrupted by modern conveniences. I do a lot of embroidery and quilting myself so I'm very aware of the time constraints involved in making a tapestry by hand.

What needs your attention: I didn't note any punctuation or grammar issues. Kudos. The only suggestion I would make is to eliminate the cliche Once upon a time. The story begins with In a small village.

What part I liked best: I enjoyed his inclusion of his village by his observations and the color choices that would best portray their daily activity. It showed his pride in his surroundings and his desire to please the king as well.

Overall impression: I enjoyed reading about the weaver and his desire to share his village's way of life as it was when he was commissioned to do the work. The tapestry would hang in the castle for all to see like a permanent history lesson.

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