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Review #4748225
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 Celebrating Everyone in the GoT Games Open in new Window. [13+]
Appreciating GoT Players
by Joy Author Icon
Review by Jeff Author IconMail Icon
In affiliation with The Free Folk  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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Hello Joy

I'm sending this review in connection with "Game of ThronesOpen in new Window..


*Penw* Positives

I guess it's only fitting that, for this years' Game of Thrones, I review an item from an older iteration of Game of Thrones! I can't believe this was from ten years ago at this point! *Shock2* I only have vague recollections of my time with House Lannister, as I'm pretty sure I was a Targaryen after that, and currently count myself among the Free Folk. I guess my independent streak just keeps broadening!

I really like the fact that you have tributes to the individual players all in one place. It's really fun to read all the salient details about someone from a decade ago, although I am saddened to see how many accounts are no longer here!


*Penw* Suggestions

Given the sheer amount of information in this static item, I think it might be beneficial use a bit of WritingML to better organize the page. I would suggest using quotes or indents to offset from the left-hand margin, or even utilizing things like dropnotes or popnotes to contain the information so that the piece feels a little better organized.


*Penw* Overall

Overall, this was a wonderful walk down memory lane. It's hard to believe that so much time has passed and how long this Game of Thrones has had an impact on the site. It really is amazing. Thanks for sharing!


Respectfully,

Jeff Author IconMail Icon
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