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 | Guest Book  [E] Thanks for stopping by and saying hello.  |
| (5.0)| A "Game of Thrones" review from The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise. Hello Lyn's a Witchy Woman First impression: Your Guest Book is very inviting with the white rose in the thumbnail. It's like you're welcoming visitors at the door bouquet in hand. What works: Your introductory paragraph about yourself tells a visitor quickly a few key facts about your life. It's nice that you give people a look at the person behind the screen. What needs work: The Guest Book was started in 2013. In the intro paragraph, it mentions a move from New Jersey to Las Vegas. As the Guest Book updates each time someone stops by and leaves a message, it's not clear whether the move has been completed or if that is what you're planning for currently. Final thoughts: I always like these types of items. I think I had one when I was new to the site, but I didn't have the patience to keep it in my portfolio long enough to let it fill up with greetings. I also downsized at some point and needed to get rid of things that weren't my fiction or creative writing. I hope you get a lot of visitors who leave friendly greetings and tell you a little about themselves. Currently, there is one post from ten days ago that has gone unanswered, but you do a good job at replying to those who say hi.
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