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 Mr. Nits  [E]
A frustrating telephone conversation with an IRS representative.
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Ah, now here’s a creative way of handling the Dialogue 500 prompt that we are required to do! I love this. Formatting first, you’ll want to use Size 4 Verdana to ensure readability and compatibility across devices. I would also suggest adding a space between each line of dialogue to make it easier to read. Paragraphs are quite important even in a simple item.

Yours is different from mine of course, but perfectly suitable to your situation as a Canadian, who doesn’t have to worry about taxes on April 15th. I went the route of someone who had no income in the previous year because he couldn’t work due to illness; I wonder what other fanciful spins there are upon the prompt. Maybe someday I’ll stop by and read a few after the GoT is over and the dust settles *Laugh* Anyway, I don’t see anything I would correct here; the dialogue is amusing and fast paced and brings the story together clearly towards the punchline at the end.

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