\"Writing.Com
*Magnify*
SPONSORED LINKS
BY ONLINE AUTHORS
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4747992
Review #4747992
Viewing a review of:
 Mr. Nits Open in new Window. [E]
A frustrating telephone conversation with an IRS representative.
by SandraLynn Author Icon
Review of Mr. Nits  Open in new Window.
In affiliation with The WDC Angel Army  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Access:  Public | Hide Review (?)
Greetings from the House of Mormont!
By participating in a Writing.com activity called "Game of Thrones" Open in new Window., I am in no way endorsing the GoT franchise or identifying as a fan thereof. I’m here to help my team win *Smile*
*CakeB*HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews" Open in new Window.*CakeP*


Ah, now here’s a creative way of handling the Dialogue 500 prompt that we are required to do! I love this. Formatting first, you’ll want to use Size 4 Verdana to ensure readability and compatibility across devices. I would also suggest adding a space between each line of dialogue to make it easier to read. Paragraphs are quite important even in a simple item.

Yours is different from mine of course, but perfectly suitable to your situation as a Canadian, who doesn’t have to worry about taxes on April 15th. I went the route of someone who had no income in the previous year because he couldn’t work due to illness; I wonder what other fanciful spins there are upon the prompt. Maybe someday I’ll stop by and read a few after the GoT is over and the dust settles *Laugh* Anyway, I don’t see anything I would correct here; the dialogue is amusing and fast paced and brings the story together clearly towards the punchline at the end.

Thanks for sharing, take care and keep writing *HeartG*

The views and opinions on this review are mainly the things discovered by the reader and therefore, do not reflect necessarily to the group, activity and/or event being affiliated herein. This is only the opinion and suggestions of the reviewer and it is still up to the author of this piece to consider this review as a corrective action or otherwise.
Created for an activity
"The WDC Angel Army" Open in new Window.


*Gold* My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" Open in new Window..
   *CheckG* You responded to this review 04/25/2024 @ 4:20pm EDT
Printed from https://writing.com/main/my_feedback/action/view/id/4747992